Improved Storyboards and Animatic

After recieving our feedback, and completeing further research we came up with a more complex and engaging narrative, which we hope will please are target audience. We will represent to them our updated storyboards and animatic to get further feedback and to ensure that our idea appeals to them and is interesting.

Improved Storyboard:

As a group together in class we drafted up a quick shot list to guide our storyboard shown below:

This was just to get our new idea which we developed from further research and the ideas from the feedback from the target audience clear in our minds before we began the storyborads.

Storyboards:

The two storyborads at the buttom, (Two Shown Above ^) are not in the correct place as when we were going over the storyboards, we decided that we wanted to put these two scenes in as we thought they would add to the narrative. Therefore they are labelled 15a and 15b and come after shot 15 on page 4 of the storyboards.

Animatic:

Feedback: 

We showed, this second draft of the Animatic and the Storyboards to our target audience, to ensure that the ideas which we had changed and further developed attracted and appealed to them.

They stated that they thought that are changes from the 1st draft shown to them had vastly improved and that it was much more engaging and appealing. Therefore we began to start to plan actually filming what we had planned. We think it would be a good idea to do a trail filming experience before we do the real thing.